tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7125214612971306615.post2257497088791097745..comments2023-11-06T12:28:13.575-05:00Comments on A Million Monkeys: Ass, by E. FlaniganJon VanZilehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14026643422328853037noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7125214612971306615.post-79467111866141811542010-03-15T20:29:03.655-04:002010-03-15T20:29:03.655-04:00I really liked this too. Great dialogue, as the ot...I really liked this too. Great dialogue, as the others said.<br /><br />The only thing that threw me is for some reason, at first I assumed it was a man and woman (the "I" being female) so when the talk turned sexual I thought he was going to ask her to help him out. Then the homo comment made me realize it was two guys, but I still thought they were adults. I think it's because of the picture that was the prompt. <br /><br />But once I realized they were two teenage boys I <i>really</i> enjoyed it.Melanie Hooyengahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08781235493983907234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7125214612971306615.post-26261227046495794442010-03-13T10:18:40.120-05:002010-03-13T10:18:40.120-05:00LOVE IT. My God, but this was REAL. Great voice, E...LOVE IT. My God, but this was REAL. Great voice, E.Erica Orloffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16415925758466527671noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7125214612971306615.post-24992926999942711102010-03-12T13:05:45.990-05:002010-03-12T13:05:45.990-05:00Lurker, you are so right. I have inspiration right...Lurker, you are so right. I have inspiration right under my nose. And not surprisingly, this was his favorite story of mine, LOL. He thought it was the most relatable!? <br /><br />I'm glad you thought it was funny, it was meant to be. You have to know your audience, and for this story mine was apparently 15-year-old boys. And you. :)E. Flanigannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7125214612971306615.post-23421700026625781052010-03-12T12:57:13.088-05:002010-03-12T12:57:13.088-05:00Melody, I only write these monthly prompts nowaday...Melody, I only write these monthly prompts nowadays, but a long long time ago, I was aiming to be a screenwriter. (Thus, the interest in dialogue.) It's been fun to have an outlet again ....<br /><br />I usually try to be a little more high-brow, but I've had an emotionally heavy month and this was the result!E. Flanigannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7125214612971306615.post-68997952384322802492010-03-12T11:50:33.847-05:002010-03-12T11:50:33.847-05:00I thought this was laugh-out-loud funny at a few p...I thought this was laugh-out-loud funny at a few parts. And could (I think) have only been written by someone with a teenage boy lurking around the house :)Jon VanZilehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14026643422328853037noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7125214612971306615.post-74422857844101502852010-03-12T10:41:43.121-05:002010-03-12T10:41:43.121-05:00Wow, your dialogue is super sharp, and I'm sti...Wow, your dialogue is super sharp, and I'm still giggling with the image of the guy's tight-ass walk. Nice job. I had no idea you had a talent for writing.Melodyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13363754468317883544noreply@blogger.com