tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7125214612971306615.post386380842359115673..comments2023-11-06T12:28:13.575-05:00Comments on A Million Monkeys: Change of Plans, by Melanie AvilaJon VanZilehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14026643422328853037noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7125214612971306615.post-82524918110651055802009-09-15T23:37:43.415-04:002009-09-15T23:37:43.415-04:00Sorry I'm so late to the party, but I wanted t...Sorry I'm so late to the party, but I wanted to add that your sense of humor really came out in this story! There were a lot of funny little touches that added to the overall mood. <br /><br />I liked the line about fleas in his ears .... it reminded me of Pig Pen from Peanuts :)E. Flanigannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7125214612971306615.post-60280479630321688672009-09-15T15:54:22.527-04:002009-09-15T15:54:22.527-04:00Thanks Natasha.
Lurker, I figured he knows what c...Thanks Natasha.<br /><br />Lurker, I figured he <i>knows</i> what clowns are like so...<br /><br />Jude, I hadn't broken it down that way in my head, but when you phrase it like that, it does sound quite out there. I hope Erica shares her 2¢ anyway. :PMelanie Hooyengahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08781235493983907234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7125214612971306615.post-4558580729519917572009-09-15T15:17:01.778-04:002009-09-15T15:17:01.778-04:00Good one, Melanie. Erica probably can't read i...Good one, Melanie. Erica probably can't read it since she's afraid of clowns, LOL. And a clown selling nooses for gin money, well, that's REALLY scary.Jude Hardinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09994813046526310594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7125214612971306615.post-89037203767518733012009-09-15T13:28:02.382-04:002009-09-15T13:28:02.382-04:00This was good—very, very clever and very spot-on c...This was good—very, very clever and very spot-on characters! This was by far my favorite line: "He still didn't understand why more kids weren't afraid of clowns." I laughed out loud!Jon VanZilehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14026643422328853037noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7125214612971306615.post-63031780122386846132009-09-15T12:35:11.019-04:002009-09-15T12:35:11.019-04:00Oh wow, Melanie! You caught the voice of it, and I...Oh wow, Melanie! You caught the voice of it, and I can totally understand why he's out there selling nooses. Totally believable!Spy Scribblerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14299551957327543491noreply@blogger.com