So, in honor of my own awful habit, and in honor of the rewrite that I'm just (*still*) finishing, here is the most recent last sentence of my book:
In an instant, Murph's room was engulfed in laughter and the chattering of two hundred tiny hot air balloons, each lending its own unique voice to the ocean of joyous noise.
So can anybody guess my theme?
6 comments:
Something to do with hot air?
LOL!
Exactly ... the recurring theme of my life.
The motif suggests something to do with hearing sound, maybe for the first time (?)...
I didn't know hot air balloons could laugh! Now I want to hear that sound.
The rediscovery of childhood?
That's funny ... I knew the sound part of it would throw people off. The hot air balloons are attached to tiny noisemakers, so that's why they're so noisy. Each one is the size of a golfball, and they're unique because we're all unique: it's about discovering our own voices, our own identities.
Anyway, it makes more sense in context.
I hope.
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